Assess Your Final Draft At this point, you're ready to send it off, either in the mail, handing it off, or sending it through the Internet tubes. Let's take a last look at the good examples put together, Jean's better draft.
Go with one of the classics, because they're used for a reason. If you sound too stiff and formal, it comes off like a holiday card. If you reiterate your call to action, it can carry a whiff of desperation. Just get out gracefully and quickly once you've said your piece.