Also, her closing call to action sounds more like a threat. You want to leave the reader with an avenue for follow-up, but don't intimidate them into responding. After all, they're not obligated to respond. You want to make them want to reach out to you for more information or next steps.
Here are some other terms that may also be included: Confidentiality » the agreement and any information learned will remain confidential. Covenants » things each party must do while negotiations are taking place. Special Terms » any special terms that the parties agree will be in the purchase agreement, such as leaving certain items of furniture or hiring certain employees.