Go with one of the classics, because they're used for a reason. If you sound too stiff and formal, it comes off like a holiday card. If you reiterate your call to action, it can carry a whiff of desperation. Just get out gracefully and quickly once you've said your piece.
Assess Your Final Draft At this point, you're ready to send it off, either in the mail, handing it off, or sending it through the Internet tubes. Let's take a last look at the good examples put together, Jean's better draft.